I often feel a passing glance that catches my heart.
The feeling when your eyes are bypassed and you heart welcomes their thoughts
Thoughts of goodness
Thoughts of clarity
Clarity of a pure unprejudiced thought with a glance
A look
A feeling
Of an unseen bond that holds us together
Together the combination of our virgin eyes
Upon each others heart
Never knowing or seeing
Each other before
Before that glance, that look
I recall nothing
Because there were no thoughts of you
You that has brought my mind to a new reality
Reality that
I may never see you again
But I will relive this feeling
When ever your heart returns
Returning your thoughts to me in any form
So I can glance at your beauty
Once again
no more
Author notes
Tried a little something I saw some one else do.
After each stanza, quartern, the last word starts the next one. It sort of begins with an ending.
I walk around the city and fall in love with many things. Children, women, the way an old tree hangs. Just for a glancing moment. I smile
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A contest entry
- Sensual Style by azlyn.
939 points, ended January 21, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
This poem reminds me of the poem you wrote about the smell of a woman, but it also seems like deja vu. a glance in placing, feelings as if you know this person, maybe you have in a pass life or maybe God wants you to know that person for a reason, you never know, you have penned an excellent write that makes the reader think, it opens the mind, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Thanks Sexy rain - its always a pleasure to hear from you and your great thoughts
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Stunning write...love the feeling of the glance...taken as more than just an exchange of vision. Deeply felt as a sensation of desire. Interesting sensual style!!!
Thanks for the entry and best of luck!
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thanks so much
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I so enjoyed reading this piece of poetry...
I do like the form, and I think you did a
fantastic job...very sensual, Poet
Love, Lane
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Thank U Lane - I try to keep it in that sensual way. it feels better.
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And when their eyes perchance did meet it was as though they had known each other their entire lives. Two strangers brought together for a moment, looking into each others soul. A nod, a smile and the day goes on. This was beautiful my friend and I am so happy I saw this one today. I haven't been by in a while. Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen with all of us and best wishes in the contest with this lovely entry. I love the style you tried out and I have seen that done. You wove a beautiful tale with it. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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Sunnyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!! Hey there. miss U my friend I should have left you some bread crumbs to find your way back. Thanks for all of you lovely words. Hope to see U around soon ~ Mykeee
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Mykeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, It has been a while my friend and missed you too. Wishing a safe, healthy and happy New Year for you and yours. 
I don't need bread crumbs to find your works. Thank you for the beautiful pieces you pen that bring out those words. I will be stopping by whenever I can. Joyce
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The title and the poem itself clearly portray the moment in time when four eyes meet and see nothing else save for each other's soul,indeed it is a gift to share a momententory glance like this instead of a glacial stare straight ahead.
NB within the second stanza methinks you may have meant "bond" instead of "bound?"
Especially liked the description within the author notes of the walk around the city and falling in love with many things seen.
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Thank U Yvette ( greatest editor online
) I did make the change. Appreciate you always.
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I really enjoyed reading this
sensual at it's best I think you did a wonderful job with the imagery here...good luck in the contest.
CC♥
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Thank U darlin - I appreciate your time always.
Keeeeee!!
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