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Thinking of Him

Every day I think of him,
Every night I think of him,
Every week I think of him,
Every month I think of him,
I think of him year round,
I can't get him out of my head,

Last year he talked to me,
he was nice to me,
I began to like him,
but things change,
he became mean,
Hurting me,
now I'm all alone,
and I can't get him out of my head,
what wrong with me,
he hurt me,
and all I think about is him,
HELP,
it is not right,
how can anyone love someone,
that has hurt you,
but,
I LOVE HIM.....

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  • RosalindRawr-rific
    January 14, 2008
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    Ohh, i'm so sorry i hope you can foget about him.. But it was a great poem =)


  • Crazy-Dan
    January 14, 2008

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    line 9 you have a typo begain= began

    damn
    i hope this was not from personal experience, because that would be bad, but this as a poem was not half bad I must say.

    keep writing Good Job.

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 14, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Sometimes it is just a case of wanting to be loved even if it does include pain and hurt, I hope you don't think this is what you deserve because there is so much better out there for you

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  • heartofpainfultears
    January 13, 2008
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    awww