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Back to Reality

    How cruel the world can be.
                            Live according to the golden rule
            -- unless you're gold plated.

                                      Words can act like salt in wounds
        Just as silence can be the knife that made them.

"...and I saw God cry in the reflection of my enemies, and all those lovers with no time for me..."

              A dream's a wish you mae while sleeping.
    A nightmare is a crack back to reality without waking up.

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  • frownsnfreckles
    April 14, 2008
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    'words can act like salt in wounds
    just as silence can be the knife that made them'
    a very deep and thoughtful metaphor.
    This seems to present itself almost as a fragment, like part of a dream, the final line was really good too. You need to correct 'make' in line 7
    interesting! well done