How cruel the world can be.
Live according to the golden rule
-- unless you're gold plated.
Words can act like salt in wounds
Just as silence can be the knife that made them.
"...and I saw God cry in the reflection of my enemies, and all those lovers with no time for me..."
A dream's a wish you mae while sleeping.
A nightmare is a crack back to reality without waking up.
Please tell me what you think
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'words can act like salt in wounds
just as silence can be the knife that made them'
a very deep and thoughtful metaphor.
This seems to present itself almost as a fragment, like part of a dream, the final line was really good too. You need to correct 'make' in line 7
interesting! well done
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