you may not believe me
when i say you're beautiful
and you make a face
when i tell you, you mean the world
but every word out of my mouth
everything little thing i say is true
no matter what kind of past
whether its bad or good
i'll be here for you
and our future
you're all that matters
you're smile's all that counts
you've got me wrapped around your finger
and that's just the way i like it
i want to make you happy
and your face just brightens my life
baby, i love you
deeper than my soul
and like you said we'll be those couples who
last through out high school, make it through the war, and more
A contest entry
- Tryyy and fit a square into a circle :] *OPTIONS* by innocence jaded.xx.
525 points, ended May 2, 2008, 43 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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very cleverly done. Sounds very much like the lyrics to a song.
Your closing line was a good one, making full sense of the feelings had throughout, well done.
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thank you!
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Awww
This poem is so sweet :] Very good. I loved how it was what you felt, and also the originality in this piece was fantastic! Great job on this.
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