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Earth Angel



Enticed by pleas unheard;
                    drawn inexplicitly by the
              tugging of heartstrings,
                       they materialize
                 at times of great need

Appearing unerringly
               with a gentle voice,
                      a feathered touch,
               and the soothing embrace
       that staunches bleeding
                    of wounds unseen

Reaching inner depths
                          with softness,
                a quiet power emanating
      from empathy’s heart,
           radiating selfless,
                  compassionate love

Touching innermost places
                       hidden from view,
        calming whispers opening doors
                 once guarded;
             confronting the demons that
                        cower inside

Healing, from within,
            wounds ancient and deep,
                    eradicating darkness
           with goodness
                            and light

 

 

 

Anchored in humility,
              singing divinity’s sweet song,
                     an orchestra;
              harp strings plucked
                           in heavenly chords

Nexus of self found
                in spiritual rebirth,

God’s presence
                guiding the way...

Earthbound angel,
          smiling face
               filled with kindness
                      and hope

Leading back
             to the Lord,
                    what had once
           gone astray

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Angels are present among us always...including earthbound ones whos wings may be unseen to all but the most observant...


It MAY be a bit of a stretch for option #1, but there IS a song called "Earth Angel"

If the poem is inappropriate, just let me know and I will remove it

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Comments

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  • poetryality silver member
    February 22

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    I don not know how I missed this celestrial work of serenity. Surreal! In a word, Beauteous!

    After reading this divinely inspired acrostic, (which is one of my favorite forms)I feel as if I am grounded without my feet ever touching the ground I wonder why I was drawn here, now? All things transpire in God's time is what I know and understand.

    Thank you for this wonder. The miracle has already happened.


    All my LOVE ♥

    Renee


  • Celticmoon
    February 22, 2008

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    Greg,
    This is a phenomenal piece you have penned.
    It's inspiring, loving, deeply touching and radiant!
    The poet within you truly shines in each word penned
    upon this page.
    Thank you for entering.
    Best of luck to you!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • Irish Heart
    February 8, 2008

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    Good write!

    This is very good and inspiring. I like the way you laid the poem out it is very artistic and intriguing. Good write and good luck!

    Sincerly,
    Em


  • Blooming Poet
    February 7, 2008

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    Nice acrosttic. This really shows off your talent as a poet. I hope my other contest editors agree, but I love this poem


  • Whoochi gold member
    January 19, 2008

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    Greg, I "get" this and understand it to the degree of which we discussed....we have been through so much and so nice to know that we can see the inside of those hurts and truths and rise above them to praise the one who rescued us...I think this stanza as you know I can relate to..."Touching innermost places
    hidden from view,
    calming whispers opening doors
    once guarded;
    confronting the demons that
    cower inside"
    We have been to that certain realm many times, and you have always been a good friend and have helped me along those bumpy paths...
    I wish only the best for you, your life....you know you always have a friend in me....
    Excellently stated....earth angels....


  • kidwithgun silver member
    January 15, 2008
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    probly one of the top 5 most amazing things i've ever read.


  • darkknight marellus
    January 15, 2008

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    Wow. I really like this poem. It's so soft, fuzzy. I think that this poem feels like a fuzzy blanket, soft and surrounding, protecting from the cold and unfeeling. I like how you formatted the poem itself. The font realy lends itself to the poem, and the image was fantastic. The poem itself is sensational, a piece of writing that will stay in my head for a while. You are correct, that of all angels it is the earthbound ones that affect us all so deeply, mainly because we don't have to believe that they are really angels. They just are ther for us and guide us. Great job, and good luck in the contest!!!!!


  • Poesing
    January 15, 2008

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    I thought this was beautiful! and so very true! If only we could recognize those people in our lives who are earth angels and appreciate them while we may! God bless.


  • BellaD
    January 14, 2008

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    Lovely poem!

    I truly enjoyed this poem. Beautiful phrasing and an acrostic to boot. Spiritually uplifting. Great job and good luck in the contest.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    I have an earth angel of my very own and I am very blessed to have her in my life.. this reminds me of everything I would love to say to her but can't quite find the words to say, this is just beautiful....

    Karen


  • Floorboards
    January 14, 2008

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    Very beautiful poem, bedroom eyes. Very soft and serene, very natural sounding too,
    nice flow,
    well done,
    Floorboards.


  • torn dragonfly
    January 14, 2008

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    Beautiful. Excellant write.
    We often forget though, how painful it is for the angels to be here on Earth, for many here don't take kindly to such beings of light. Gorgeous tribute. Good luck.

  • Little20Rookie
    January 14, 2008

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    So true...

    Sometimes we forget that there are angels amoung us, but then again there are also angels who we call friends, family right in our back yard, i love how you write with such beauty and feeling, this is a great write thank yo for sharing.

  • mmook
    January 14, 2008
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    thanks for sharing.. excellent well written and express


  • HeavenonEarth
    January 14, 2008

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    This is absolutely breathtaking Greg! A beautiful acrostic! How wonderful it is of you to pen something like this and it would have easily fit into my contest (Oh well maybe next time)

    It's truly nice to see your muse has returned! Let's hope the muse stays for awhile
    I know I would definitely like to see more of these!Thanks for the message and now it's my time to return *hug
    Happy New Year Hon!
    Much Love and Many Blessings~
    ~Joy


    • Bedroom Eyes
      January 14, 2008
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      Contest?

      What contest?

      Had I known of it I probably would have entered

      Ah well...my loss I suppose

  • pruedence
    January 14, 2008

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    Angels are real...if only we all knew this. Beautiful poem, it was soft and gently written, thanks for sharing


  • madamcb
    January 14, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This was so beautiful it brought tears to my eyes. I know angels exist and if anyone reads this they will too. This was so soothing and uplifting and spiritual and inspiring. Thanx so much, conni


  • AmazinJason
    January 13, 2008
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    very very comforting, love it.


  • Deformed Duck
    January 13, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this write. Very pretty and I just loved the words you used in this and keep up the good work.(:

  • Eulb kcalB
    January 13, 2008

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    Nexus of self found
    in spiritual rebirth,
    God’s presence
    guiding the way...

    Earthbound angel,
    smiling face
    filled with kindness
    and hope

    Leading back
    to the Lord,
    what had once
    gone astray


    a very lovely piece. I quite enjoyed and understood the premise behind the same.


  • ktothecarro
    January 13, 2008
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    wonderful and refreshing twist on the acrostic poem, beautiful word choice all around. gorgeous.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 13, 2008
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    Just adding a few more clappies cause' I love this piece


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 13, 2008
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    What a lovely acrostic like poem you have penned here - great picture prompt as well - liked the flow, the wonderful images these lines share, and the gentleness of the presentation, font and colors. Do agre that there are earth angles here for us all.


  • Desire gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    Oh My Word!!

    Love this one~~
    Powerful piece You have penned Sweet One and what Inspiration through Your words also
    with energy exuded~~
    They are around us...
    A blessing indeed
    Can I have Your autograph Bro
    You Rock!!
    and in an Acrostic tooooooooooo

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in all You do my Brother
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    Beautifully written!
    So lovely to see you here penning your wonderful words! This was a delight to read.....
    Excellent poetry as always, my friend

    Lynda


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    Angels on Earth,
    caring for one and all
    someone to help
    someone to care
    someone there when you fall.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    January 13, 2008

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    This is beautiful and so inspiring. Angels come to us in different forms that is why we must be open to everyone. We just never know if that person may be an Angel.
    Glad to see some new work. The best always...
    Soulful Woman

  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 13, 2008

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    Babe,
    This is a most beautiful write!
    Your wording is flawless
    You're so very right; there ARE angels among us...always
    We've been known to entertain angels unaware
    Wonderfully beautiful this is, darlin'
    Awesome to see your pen flowing once again!
    Many hugs and much love!!!

    ~Kitten~

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