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Grace

upon the light
being filtered by the sea
swims the most beautiful creature
at least to me

she sings her song
and plays with her friends
all her life will this be

she  takes the light
and dances with night
she shames the shore
with her beautiful song
that she will sing more

she sings to you
from her enchanting
play world under the sea
can you not hear her
'Come play with me'

Author notes

ok, i'm not the biggest fan of dolphins but i do love them... i hope u Enjoy... \
Written November 10th, 2003

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