A mirror look,
My reflection now
I’m beginning to seek
Look in I do,
Understand, I do not.
Hazy, blurred my inside image is
Or is that the sole interpretation
Of my confused thoughts alone?
In this mirror,
My soul’s window
I see not one face,
But two
Four eyes,
But only one pair belongs to me.
Mine are familiar some how,
But different at the same time.
The other set shake the secrets
Within my hollowed out skull.
I know this face too,
But it doesn’t belong to me,
Not anymore
BY: Corey Klosterman
Author notes
just a change i've recently noticed about myself, that i wish to share with you.
please tell me anything you think about it.....
Comments
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Wow, this is such a creative write I never read anything like this before. It's so full of powerful emotion and I can actually feel every line as I read on. I know how it feels to find not one person but two in a mirror of a reflection of yourself great write.
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hmm i like the idea of it but maybe a bit more structure could be good, you have a good idea here flowing and there are parts that are grade A poetry, keep the ink flowing.
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