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A Recipe For Happiness




First, gather your utensils and ingredients
a warm heart in which to mix them all
and a sweet smile to make the batter rise

Of course, it has to be chocolate, that's no surprise
add a touch of tenderness, feathered by angel wings
and a ray of hope, to shine light upon a darkened world

Bake with care until it's just right, then add frosting
candy pink with lime green and juicy orange, it's starting to look a treat
wrap each layer in pearls of wisdom, then sprinkle daisies all around

Now enjoy my cake, filled with happiness and baked for you with love

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt Ok this is what I want
This shall be fun

In 10 lines I want you to bake me a cake yup
with frosting and decorations the works
OR
If you cant bake a cake then go to bakery and steal me one but it better be a good in 10 lines and dont get caught because you will sit in jail lol

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  • F a t i m a
    January 14, 2008

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    yumm.......
    yummm............
    a n d yummmm.......xD

    - really a shweet poem mags!....`congrats on hm


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    forget the wisdom, i will settle for the cake in the picture , that made me happy already. hugs and squeezes M XX GOOD LUCK


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    If it ain't carrot cake I am not there Twinny.
    Marvelous creation nonetheless...
    Did you add bi-carb????
    Congrats on the HM!
    Loo


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    Aww this is just beautiful I love all your ingredients and certainly want a slice of your heaven please
    Congratulations on your shiny
    gaylene


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    hehe auntie you made me hungry and its only 5am lol i love the whole why you wrote this well done and congrats on the honary. your amazing


  • Desire gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    Wow!!

    Ok me Hungry now
    Love the ingredients You have brought forth~
    I won't be able to stick to my no sugar plan
    Boy do I sure need some of Your skills
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Baking Skills!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    This is very nice indeed thank you for your lovely cake it is full of love and beauty goodluck in the contest much love


  • SweetNessaLynn
    January 13, 2008

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    This is a wonderful take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest. -Nessa


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    wonderful take on this
    the cake looks yummy
    and I do not have a sweet tooth at the moment

    Riftkin

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