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Cleansing.

Missing image

I exhale

my impurities,

Offering them to God

for cleansing...

Then breathing in

deeply,

I welcome the love

he re-sends.

 

 

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Artist is: Melonie Weidner
Picture Title:"Breathe"

A contest entry

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  • HeavenScent4U
    February 25, 2008

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    this is about perfect for the prompt. i love the spiritual aspect of it, nicely done congrats on the HM although i think it deserved better be well and be blessed


  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    Awe... I am usually not to big on religion but this was lovely. I truely enjoyed thank you for entering this into my contest.


    Delila

  • Bad Bill
    January 14, 2008
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    An intelligent and lovely take on the picture/prompt.

    Bill


  • Celtic Legend
    January 13, 2008

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    I love how you took the picture and wrote something beautiful desribing it's meaning! this is a wonderful write.