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Endless Debate

If there is free will,
  do we pick our fate?

What then of love?
  Is it dreams we chase?

Seems a ponderous source,
  of endless debate.

My soul is mine
  to give, not to take.




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  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    January 14, 2008

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    I'm loving how simple it is but how much deeper it goes. Wish I could write like this.
    Beautiful piece and amazing ending. As always, ♥ you muchly.

    ♥Bandaid