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my little light

When i'm in darkness
theres always this light
that Glows
and keeps me loved
it smiles at me
and tells me "its ok"
and it made me see
how different life can be
and it shines so bright
brighter than a thousand sun
and its my light
my light that brighten my darkness
my WORLD and my fears
and tells me
" you'll be okay no matter how much you break"
and my little bright light
is You Drake!!!!
I Love You!!
More Than You Know
And I Want To Be With You
As Long As You Glow

I Couldn't Help But think about Drake so i thought "hey....i Want The World to know i love him....and i really really really do!!!

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  • DraidenGunGiest
    October 22, 2008

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    Uh .... ok !

    Comparing Love to Light ... I did that once ... but it wasn't this good ... hehe Good work Lass -DGG


  • sexy
    October 15, 2008
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    who is Drake? Draconian? They are coming! They'll be here on 21 Dec 2012!Scary!


  • afroqban
    October 13, 2008

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    wow i was happy to see such talent in this. oh wow looks like i have found a new favs to read. much love and respect

  • Sun-shiney
    August 30, 2008

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    my little light in darkened places my little light in darkened times my little light to keep me warm my little light to tug at my heart.

  • DreamGirl91
    August 9, 2008

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    Awww... Love is a strong word. I'm glad you found use of it!


  • Mademokid
    July 29, 2008
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    nice

    love it


  • vampire.lust.death
    May 25, 2008
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    awwwwwww

    this is sweet i like


  • XXWolfOfInsanityxX
    May 4, 2008
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    I love this write jersey girl it was great keep up the good work =]


  • glow-worm
    March 30, 2008
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    A thousand suns... have i heard that somewhere? Maybe.. Timmy Turner?


  • SongOfSilence
    March 26, 2008
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    whoa.

    another great write from an awesome poet.

  • kaze ryuu
    March 22, 2008
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    I like it, you can rhyme good


  • guitarbowler6
    March 22, 2008
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    this is pretty amazing i like it nice


  • dark-an-cold
    March 13, 2008
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    wow a thousand suns that must be hot nice poem


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    March 13, 2008

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    and it made me see... I think here you meant and it's made me see...
    brighter than a thousand sun.... I think here you meant brighter than a thousand suns.
    Okay enough of my catching things you can fix. I thought that this was a really sweet poem. Good job. Will read more later. Hope you don't mine me finding things you can fix.
    Peace out

    Dani


  • VampyreGod
    March 12, 2008
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    awww

    this is really, really sweet,
    keep up the awesomeness!!


  • Lady Australis silver member
    March 10, 2008
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    this is beautiful baby
    well done
    draky im not a evil mother in law!


  • sweetnsassy0888
    March 5, 2008
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    very good work.

  • dark lotus52
    February 29, 2008
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    awsome didnt expect the ending.


  • Erase-Replace
    February 24, 2008
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    nice...adorable =P


  • Aethersix
    February 23, 2008
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    hehehe I love it =]


  • byran almighty
    February 15, 2008
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    Whoa Mom This 4 dad right ?

    This Beautiful I Love It!
    oh N IT'S 4 no 1...my poem


  • Perception
    February 2, 2008

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    Aw.. A typical love poem.. I would have liked more description.. But, what you have here, is wonderful unscripted love. If you know what I mean

    It's kinda confusing how you capitalize some of the words in the poem and not others. I would suggest that you capitalize nothing unless it is a proper noun, or you need it to be capitalized for some reason.

    Cute little write you have here... Pleasure to read

  • VampyreGod
    February 2, 2008
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    awww

    me likey ^^

  • DraidenGunGiest
    January 17, 2008
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    Delightful .

    I gotta find one of those lights ... heh .


  • oTaZo
    January 13, 2008

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    :X

    my love im speechless it was simply a poem that makes me love you even more. i feel the same way and want to be with you forever and il never let anything come between us
    i love you my wife

  • Aaron almighty
    January 13, 2008
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    Oh Ya!

  • Aaron almighty
    January 13, 2008

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    So U Can Write bout Drake But Not Something as Good as me??? i'm hurt chi!!

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