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Bad Pit Bull (cinquain)

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chain breaks

pit bull attacks

child screams in disbelief

dog growls and rips flesh of child's arm

gun fires

 

 

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news release on tv...

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  • arafura gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    chain breaks...

    Pretty stark and powerful my friend... and makes the reader think a bit! Well done. Good luck in the contest!

  • Judith Chandler
    January 13, 2008
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    An unusual take but I quite enjoyed it. It's another variation on the way Animals Live and Die and it is well written in a nice, concise way. Quite different from some of the other entries -- a dog dying in a violent way after antisocial behaviour.

    Thank you for your entry.