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Believe

The light of the goddess
of the viod Shall Shine.
And so shall the
planets align.

She will guide us to
safty from those who
seek to persacute us.
And all that is agianst
us shall be a fuss.

She shall look after
her wicca kids.
And kiss us as we
close our eye lids.

Let no harm come to
those who believe.
Thus shall we
never Leave.

For as I weave my 
words around your
head under the full
moon of the night.
so her voice shall
be so very bright.

so no matter what
happens just keep
her name in your
heart and BELIEVE.

Author notes

I love Hicate so much she changed my life and i have gained so much from her including a roof over my head,
food in my body, my health, and a job to support my disabled mother.

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  • Florida Sunshine
    February 8, 2008
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    This is beautiifully said ~ I enjoyed the movement of the piece ~ ~ it move elegantly~ what a beautiful tribute ~ It's nice that you have found someone to touch your life so beautifully~

    Thanks for entering the "Set the Bar" contest ~ I really appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ best of luck to you!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 28, 2008
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    I love the sentiments on this piece...like the ending lines too! .


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    January 14, 2008

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    Very nice feeling to this piece. And I love your author's notes. Makes the write all the more powerful.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm

  • Nighttime angel
    January 13, 2008

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    this is a great poem. I love it, as I was reading through this poem I got goosebumps all over. I really like the last stanza. great job.

    kat