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Isligh

I breathed nightly to you
that they would guide you home
(every one of your stars)
  but lightly, keeping nothing.

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Isligh Bridin

'lights will guide you home
and ignite your bones
and i will try
to fix you.'
~ Fix You, Coldplay

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    Nice easy flowing feeling thank you for entering my contest. Well done.


    Delila


  • Jornada
    January 15, 2008
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    I like it--it breathes gently and says a lot in a few words.


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    ENJOYABLE

    I have just finished reading your poem, and wish to tell you how much i enjoyed the read, and to wish you all the best in this contest.

    Take care
    ~Whispers~


    • Dragomiloff
      January 13, 2008
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      thank you so much. it was just one of those pieces where I had so much to say but no words for any of it, so I said very little. pretty frustrating, but I'm glad I was able to make a little something from it.