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The Opera was cold

The Opera was a very cold film, a hopeless and dark film, no hope, no love.

It feels like my heart on a summers day,

Alone and cold and no one loving it,

Gray skies, Blue diamonds falling,

"How was it?"

"The Opera was Cold."

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  • Edna Sweetlove
    August 23, 2008

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    Which opera are you talking about? I don't recognise it. Surely not Wagner? I suppose some of Schoenberg is cold and maybe Berg also. Please clarify.

    • It was made for a contest...From a song quote...I hate Opera. I don't know what your talking about.


  • Missa
    August 7, 2008
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    great! but you need to add the option. when you add that, i will put you in the finalist.


  • Akari
    January 15, 2008
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    really really good :)


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    January 13, 2008

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    so so simple, yet such inspiration from the quote. I like this poem, it gives off an image of dischord to the opera. They tend to bore me, as well...

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