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Supplication

Missing image

Eternal resonance

fumes in soul.

 

God's spirit

sensed through

inhaling

ethereal love's perfume,

revelations exhaled

resuscitating

lungs polluted

by sorrow.

 

Author notes

Artist is: Melonie Weidner
Picture Title:"Breathe"
Website to other beautiful pictures:http://www.listenforjoy.com/prints.html

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  • Arizona Sunset
    January 18, 2008
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    I love the spiritual take on this prompt! Congrats to you on the silver! ~blessings always~ Trisha


  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    Oh I so like this take on the pic.
    Well done and thank you for entering my contest :


    Delila


  • rosepoet
    January 14, 2008

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    Great write my dear friend poet*


  • CherryOnTop
    January 13, 2008
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    This is so beautiful and another masterpiece.


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    WONDERFUL

    Hello, I have just read your poem, and wish to tell you just how much i enjoyed the read.Your words are a great take on the picture and its title.I liked your poem because it has a spiritual theme to it. I really liked this part....

    inhaling ethereal love's perfume.

    I wish you all the best in this contest.

    Take care,
    ~Whispers~

  • Virginia Logsdon
    January 13, 2008
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    OOOOH! I really like this one alot!

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