Eyes bear
tales
of nomadic hearts.
Camping
on solitude's desert,
intruder
brought by fate's wind.
Soul mate kindling
ends darkness.
Author notes
Artist is: Melonie Weidner
Picture Title: "Between Us"
Website to other beautiful pictures: http://www.listenforjoy.com/prints.html
A contest entry
- 20 words only #2 by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended January 17, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The second to the last line is very nice.
Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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Another beautiful write of yours. I especially like line 7. Good look in the contest
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i read this at a very personal level... first my family CAMPS... haha... but mostly, the unexpected 'intruder' who comes into the campfire's light, becoming the one who makes the flames dance... well, that really touched me.
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You have penned the essence of camping brilliantly my friend..Good luck in the contest.
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