Love's wind
opening heart's wings,
dancing cloud's cradle
her angelic caress
striking passion's candle
to light soar
from darkness cesspool.
Author notes
Artist is: Melonie Weidner
Picture Title:"Open Spaces"
Website to other beautiful pictures: http://www.listenforjoy.com/prints.html
A contest entry
- 20 words only #1 by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended January 17, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oohh the begining was sensational
Thank you for entering my contest 
Delila
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opps i forgot your applaud great poet.poet
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an amazing write stright from the heart. Your words are always impressive. poet
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great take on the prompt... those opening lines... just made me smile.
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...passion's candle to light soar...
Ohhhh. I do love that line. Like being on an amazing roller coaster. Beautifully done. ~Pamela
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