Softly she sighed,
Spilling her essence out
Into the rounded air,
To join the swirling shimmering
Current of lost souls.
A contest entry
- 20 words only #3 by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended January 18, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Most wonderfully done
So much said in so few words; I very much enjoyed this
Thank you for sharing and for being part of the contest! -
OOOOOh I really really like this take.
Thank you so much for entering my contest.
Delila
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Thank you very much
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WONDERFUL
I have just finished reading your poem, and wish to tell you just how much i enjoyed the read and to wish you all the best in this contest.
I found these lines here....
Softly she sighed,
Spilling her essence out
Into the rounded air,
to be very seductive.I loved those lines.Your write painted a beautiful picture of a spiritual love.
Take care,
~Whispers~
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Thank you very much
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