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Meditation

In solitude I meditate
My mind, heart, soul at peace
Living my life once again
With memories that never cease

In a list

A contest entry

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    Sigh... Very peaceful take that matches the pic very well. There is a little typo I believe though. Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila

  • Bad Bill
    January 13, 2008
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    A very nicely controlled and well-rhymed piece. Very good work.

    Bill


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    PEACEFUL

    Hello,
    I have just finished reading your entry,and wish to tell you just how much i have enjoyed the read.Your poem was a great take on the picture as well as its title.Your write painted a peaceful picture in the mind of the reader. The first two lines of your write i liked the most....

    In solitude I meditate
    My mind, heart, soul at peace

    they left me feeling very peaceful.
    I wish you all the best in this contest.

    Take care,
    ~Whispers~