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The Beginning

Missing image
Run with me
deep into the valley below
let's get lost together
deep in the earth
where it all began

Author notes

20 Words
"Open Spaces"

A contest entry

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    Ummm.. very nice thought to the picture.
    Well done. And thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • Desire gold member
    January 13, 2008
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    Oh My!!

    Another Wonderful weaving of words my Friend with Inspiration from the picture prompt~~

    let's get lost together
    deep in the earth

    Love this!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • sassylibra0074
    January 13, 2008

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    wow

    This poem is so moving, the words create so much depth in emotion and wonderful imagary. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    Your 20 words of " open spaces "
    is really so refreshing,
    I am so tired right now, I would love to get lost in any valley LoL

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    January 13, 2008

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    Oh my. This is such a nice take on the prompt. A place to begin...Wonderfully uplifting. ~Pamela

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