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Child

I run out on feilds
I praise the sun
I laugh from my heart
With the others I run
Child Again

A contest entry

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    oh this is a happy poem.
    It could have been just as powerful with out
    so many "I" but still this is lovely. Thank you for entering the contest.


    Delila


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    January 13, 2008
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    OH I love where you went with this prompt. Well done. This just made me smile. ~Pamela