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The Escape

Missing image

Our forbidden love
blossoming everyday
searching for understanding
parental blessings
dying for freedom
wanting to escape
planning for life ahead

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20 Words
"Between Us"

A contest entry

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    oooh I love the forbiddon love of youth. Nice take you have chosen here. When I was 16 I found myself in this similar situation Thank you for entering my contest


    Delila


  • Desire gold member
    January 13, 2008
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    Wow!!

    You have brought forth many images in 20Words my Friend
    Love Your take on the picture prompt~~

    parental blessings
    dying for freedom
    wanting to escape

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~