Livened

Image Credit: "Open Spaces" © Melonie Weidner

Dancing through your visage,
like an open door,

I am livened;

threadbare in puerile
of limitless light,

plethoric in cognition.

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A contest entry

20 words only #1 by delightfulmess. 450 points, ended January 17, 2008, 13 entries
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delightfulmess
January 16, 2008

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Very nice. I enjoyed this entry
Thank you so much for entering my contest.

Delila

Pamela A Lamppa
January 20, 2008
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Delila
Thank you so much. I am so pleased you enjoyed this one and am so grateful for the honor of gold in your contest. Thank you. ~Pamela

ashjoe76
January 13, 2008
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wonderful choice of words. It leaves a vivid feeling.

Pamela A Lamppa
January 20, 2008
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ashjoe76
Thank you so much. ~Pamela

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