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Mercy

Absorbing the God-Spirit,
becoming
one with one with one.
Life force fusion
with flesh.
I cry mercy.

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  • penman gold member
    January 16, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    Very nice depiction, But It looks like you are a word short of 20 Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    January 13, 2008
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    Oooh I do like this. Nice work. ~Pamela


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    this is so beautifully written from the picture and it captures alot in it. well done and best of luck in the contest