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Two

Earth
two people
beyond
conventional
love.
Souls
twining in
ecstasy of
becoming
part of God.

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    Really enjoyed the take on this
    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    wow this is such an amazing write and is powerfully written. i love the description. well done and best of luck