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The Soul Inside

My soul inside,
breaths up to the night,
to the stars,
it as taken flight
past the moon to mars.

A contest entry

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 17, 2008
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    Yes this is very nice. Enjoyed the flow Thank you for entering


    Delila


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    January 13, 2008
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    LOVELY

    Hello There,
    I have just finished reading your entry,and wish to tell you just how much i have enjoyed the read.

    Your poem painted a peaceful picture of, a soul taking flight becoming one with the universe, within the readers mind.

    I wish you all the best in this contest.

    Take care,
    ~Whispers~