Inhaling the universe,
Our touch becomes the
lava that rends the earth,
bringing forth the fire
of consummation.
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A contest entry
- 20 words only #3 by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended January 18, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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stunning, very nicely done
nice imagery which touches the senses here great take on the prompt. be well and be blessed
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Oooooh.. Stunning take on the picture.
Well done and thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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Amazing Mom, very intense, good luck in the contest
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A very powerful take on the picture--I like this one a lot. There's a kind of mystical passion to it.
Bill
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AWESOME
Hello there,
I have just finished reading your entry, and wish to tell you just how much i have enjoyed the read.I found your poem to be awesome in its visuals.I tried to pick out what i liked most about your write, but simply could not do it, as i love the whole poem, and could not disect it.
I wish you all the best in this contest.
Take care,
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wow mommy wolfie this is powerfully written from the picture and holds so much withi it. well done and best of luck
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