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Photo taken by me, Kitsilano Beach, Vancouver, BC. 2006.
This is an amazing idea - this Haiga, thing.
In a list
A contest entry
- HAIGA by Sonja.
2800 points, ended January 27, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The composition and Haiku are very nice. The color you chose for your font was too dark. A lighter version of the sand color, but not too light because of the white foam, would have worked better.
I used to live just south of Vancouver, in White Rock and south Surry. A beautiful area!
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This is a very interesting picture. Idea for it was a pretty common, but the most important thing what raise up its quality is its nice composition. I like how it captured half land and half incoming foam and the shapes of footprints following the shape of foam.
Scores:
Picture quality:
If only your exposition was a bit longer then foam will not be blurred. 9,5
Text layout:
I have to mention that it is a bit hard to read it because it is settled over the foam: 8,5
Haiku per se: 10
Total scores: 28 of 30
Nice done.
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Amazing idea, coupled with an amazing write and picture, captured at the perfect moment!best of luck in the contest
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i like this it reminds me of the poem "Footprints" one of my fav ... good luck in the contest ... ~ cheeky ~
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I like this a lot! You create a vivid picture but also some powerful deep abstract feelings and images. Thanks so much for sharing.
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an interesting little proverb!
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Thanks for this entry. I will comment it when contest will be closed.
~Sonja~
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