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Footprints (Haiga)

 

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Photo taken by me, Kitsilano Beach, Vancouver, BC. 2006.

This is an amazing idea - this Haiga, thing.

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    January 27, 2008

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    The composition and Haiku are very nice. The color you chose for your font was too dark. A lighter version of the sand color, but not too light because of the white foam, would have worked better.

    I used to live just south of Vancouver, in White Rock and south Surry. A beautiful area!


  • Sonja
    January 27, 2008

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    This is a very interesting picture. Idea for it was a pretty common, but the most important thing what raise up its quality is its nice composition. I like how it captured half land and half incoming foam and the shapes of footprints following the shape of foam.

    Scores:

    Picture quality:
    If only your exposition was a bit longer then foam will not be blurred. 9,5

    Text layout:
    I have to mention that it is a bit hard to read it because it is settled over the foam: 8,5

    Haiku per se: 10

    Total scores: 28 of 30

    Nice done.


  • wakingdevil
    January 25, 2008

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    Amazing idea, coupled with an amazing write and picture, captured at the perfect moment!best of luck in the contest


  • The Poetic Angel
    January 24, 2008

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    i like this it reminds me of the poem "Footprints" one of my fav ... good luck in the contest ... ~ cheeky ~


  • fallingstarrr
    January 19, 2008

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    I like this a lot! You create a vivid picture but also some powerful deep abstract feelings and images. Thanks so much for sharing.


  • DogFish silver member
    January 13, 2008
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    an interesting little proverb!


  • Sonja
    January 13, 2008
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    Thanks for this entry. I will comment it when contest will be closed.
    ~Sonja~

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