Hearts spilled into one,
to the moon to the sun,
bound together,
shines from love,
there forever,
our dear love.
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A contest entry
- 20 words only #2 by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended January 17, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i loved the rhyming scheme and the flow of this poem. i think this is an awesome write. i also loved ghe simple feeling behind this poem. you put good emotions into a few words. excellent job.
xxundeadxtearsxx
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Ohh this has great flow for a 20 word poem
Great job and thank you for entering my contest.
delila
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