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the twilight rose

The illusions in the moonlight
Hypnotize the thoughts.
 
    Intoxicating me
      the smoke spirals above.

Indigo waters roll past
Between us.

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hmm.

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    ooooh this is very nice Well done.
    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • Risk
    January 15, 2008
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    I really enjoyed reading this I dont understand it but it just draws you in.
    Absolutely amazing


    • katie-jo
      January 16, 2008
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      Thanks. I'm not really sure I understand it either, but oh well.