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Can't Let No One

Lay down,
Show me just what you will be.
I love you.
Do you want to truly see?
See what I am.

Isn't it always the ones you truly love?
Do you ever feel left out, misplaced?
I once lived for life, for me,
That was before I had seen
That you...

Chorus
Can't let no one bring you down.
No one can control your life but you.
When you're on the ground, make no sound,
Then you will finally see, see, see, see, see
That you truly belong to me.

Drink some water and eat some chips.
Smile at me, cute little thing.
Are you the one that skinny dips? (no)
Never show nothing, take no shit (yeah)
You are the one that I have dreamed
Would forever be here with me.
So let me make you pleased.

So lay down,
Pucker those lips,
Shake those hips,
Whatever it takes
To make this night
The night of perfection.
Make it just right.
You are my only selection.

repeat chorus

Beautiful, shining,
Radiant and glimmering,
With a voice as pure as happiness,
It's your ensemble that makes you perfect.
No one else says so,
But you are as rich as gold,
In both soul and mind,
As well as body and shimmering talent.

For a forever the length of infinity,
You will always shine for me.

But you know that you...

repeat chorus

Author notes

I hope you all enjoy this song of mine, fellow readers and friends of mine. This is about a crush of mine, and if you are told who she is, then you'd probably know her pretty well. If you're from America or one of the other countries on Earth, that is.

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  • xTomorrowx
    January 19, 2008

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    This is cool, I reckon it'd be pretty good put to music...
    Oh, btw, I read your story, the novel, it took me a few hours (cos it was sooo long lol) but it was pretty good, I liked it... Only problem, in a couple of places, mainly the freeze tag bit I think, you seemed to be TOO descriptive, like, I know everyones always telling you to describe everything, but it was just a bit over the top and got a bit boring to read in the places you did that, there were only a few and the rest was really good. I really liked the idea of the story too, it was great...
    And now on this comment about your lyrics I've made it all about the novel, oh well, awesome lyrics! Love them =)