Questioned the world,
Not to defend.
But to find an answer,
With a virtue.
The world hides then,
still I shout.
Says my soul that,
Its cause “I AM ALIVE”.
Author notes
I always wonder why people ask questions to defend instead of having an answer. Then the ones who seek the answer has a soul which is alive and is not just a weed which is dead. (Prompt : I am alive)
A contest entry
- I'm Alive! by Abby In Chains..
450 points, ended January 15, 2008, 30 entries
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Comments
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Wow, I like this one..I love the very first paragraph. It made me stop and think. Well done n best of luck
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to find and answer with a virtue.. well said.
thank you very much for your entry and best of luck in the contest.
Abby
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