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Living On The Edge

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In this cutthroat existence
chains of mediocrity
bind the spirit.

Balancing
on a tightrope
of colliding emotions,
my mind whirls
back and forth,
until decisions
are merely a voice
crying in the wilderness,
unable to decipher
the here and now.

There is no equaliser,
as I teeter on the cliff
of isolation.

One wrong move
or twist of the hand
and I will ricochet between
the here
and ever after.

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  • piccola silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    wow. I really like your vocabulary usage and the way it made the poem flow. Wonderful take on the pic too. Thank you for your entry

  • lojol
    January 15, 2008
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    ive been reading some of your poams and i have enjoyed them. thank you


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    wow gran this is such an amazing take on the picture and it holds so much within your words. wel done and best of luck

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 13, 2008

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    Oh... I'm not sure what to say about this... you have captured it brilliantly... but yes... lost for words, goodluck in the contest hun

    Karen