I loved my dear wife,
for fifteen long years,
but I'm sorry to say, she's...... dead,
I'll always say how it was,
an accident,
how the hatchet stuck in her head,
CHORUS.. so i buried her in the garden
under the moonlight beneath the shed,
where we used to grow some roses,
I say used to cos now they are dead.
Well the next one,
was cousin amy,
around the corner she did dwell,
till i took out my trusty chopper,
now shes under the garden as well
CHORUS..........
Then a policeman,
he came to visit me,
all dressed up in his suit so blue,
he said "your relatives,...... they have gone missing"
well what was i supposed to do?
CHORUS...................
(SLOW SAD PART)
Now im dying,....
they'll
have to bury me,....
in the garden,
beneath the shed,
and when they dig a hole,
to put my body in.
(fast again)
I think this is what will be said,
Look there's a policeman,
and there's a hatchet,
a police dog and whistle too,..........
and little amy from round the corner,
oh i wonder what we should do?
Send for detectives,
they come to the house now,
all dressed up in their suits of Grey,
well my brother,
will promptly slay them,
cos were phsyco, its the family way
Yes they'll bury them ,
in the garden,
in the garden........
beneath....
the shed.
well we used to,
grow some roses,
i say used to cos now there
DEAD.
Author notes
wrote this a while back as a C+W tribute.
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haha this was just great...I loved how you made it a song..thanks for entering
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geez.
great poem...
good luck in the contest -
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wow, this made me laugh lol
I thought it was gonna be like sad && sombre,
then it changed tone completely lol
good luck in my contest, thanks for entering [=
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that was great, i needed a laugh. it sounds like edgar allan poe, if he were demented. i love that first stanza. the first five lines had me thinking this was going to be a lover's tragedy, but then there was "how the hatchet stuck in her head". truly a classic!
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pretty darn good. What kind of music will it be too? I really cant hear what music fits in it....I just feel like it should be to a new age metal toon...but thats just me, well anyways great write.
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This is a great poem. THank you for putting the title number in your authors comment box. Good luck in my contest
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