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Exposed Bone.

Brittle enamel chomped into;
splintered to words that were miscomprehended.
You were so mislabled.
When did i all come down to a call,
leaving muscule and bone and raw and bleeding?
Teriffied of the words; couldn't bring myself to speak.

Just self-doubting and self-dieing.

Swirling mucus when tears were cried,
never cleaned up, still hidden under the rubble
of the last and latest attack.
These bones are baring,
do you see them?
These muscles are aching,
do you see them?

do you see them?
do you see them?
do you see me?

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 14, 2008

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    The repetition of 'do you see them' followed by 'do you see me' makes me feel the true pain of what is being written. It's almost as if you are shouting the words and then just cry the last. Weakness is the worst and exposure to many things such as pain and humiliation can break the strongest of people.


    • EverxEnding silver member
      January 15, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment.
      Good luck running the prompt round contest!
      It'll be fun.