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Feel the Call

Sacred eyes enter all beyond each wall
nurtured; held within a mother’s whim
listen to the wind yes, feel the call

Gentle strings seem to flow each aura aglow
let the peace begin wipe away the strain, stain
cradled in the wisdom prepared to this kingdom

At this moment to become nurtured the nurturer
a passport through each realm only peace at the helm
receive love’s icy chills - welcome, return, the endless cycle

Lee Taylor
©
1/13/08

Author notes

This painting gives so many senses an awakening the inspirations it brings become pure life in so many realms Thank you for sharing such beauty

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  • MargaretG
    January 15, 2008

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    These words slow me down and remind me of the peace which can always be found under the turbulence of the surface waves. Congratulations for the trophy!


  • maa gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    thank you so much for this mystical interpretation of the painting-prompt ... your verse is a messenger of wisdom and clearsightedness ... wonderful ...


    maa


    • Mystical-Gardenia
      January 14, 2008

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      Dear Marion

      Thank you so much for being such an amazing contest host and for your most welcome applause and warm, encouraging comments. Indeed when we look at life we sometimes find the magical realms within

      Wishing you and yours much success in all of your endeavors

      ~Myst~


  • Tercil gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    This motherly effect is veering towards infinity with the endless cycle. The passport is very similar to the molecular technology footprint we have here, such is DNA. Nicely put in an effortless way. Much enjoyed, Tony

    • Mystical-Gardenia
      January 14, 2008
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      Hello Tony,

      Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and share your warm, insightful always welcome input and your most generous applause I'm delighted to see your amazing interpretation as always your passport to each realm we (poets)tread and share our ideas... indeed we sometimes astound each other with the insight we contribute as your work always inspires and uplifts the soul

      Wishing you much success in all of your endeavors

      ~Myst~


  • poetryality silver member
    January 13, 2008

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    I love how your words evolve here poet. There is a cycle that cements itself to a sense of magic, and mystery written in this poem. The last stanza melds the entire poem into an endless journey that has no need to cease (and I didn't want it to).

    Excellent work! I love the imagery and use of language. A class act for sure! I wish you well in the comp.



    Much Love & respect ♥

    Renee

    • Mystical-Gardenia
      January 13, 2008
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      Hello Renee

      Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and share your thoughts, wisdom, on how this piece touched you; I'm delighted you enjoyed your visit please stop by anytime and share your welcome input!!

      Wishing you and yours much success in the New Year... darling baby picture... sigh... what a sweet one!!

      ~Myst~

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