Every little raindrop falls from the sky
Lovely water patterns upon the green leaves
Painted by Mother Nature
A beautiful water picture for the world to see
I love to walk in the fields after it has rained
It always makes me smile
A contest entry
- For the kids 13 and younger: Anything to cheer me! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended January 20, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i would be grateful for any views anyone has
Comments
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Cool
I like how you use nature. Keep it up.
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it's cool.I can't use my shift key so I would have put an exclemation point. I liked it so much though i can't put cool punctuation.
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This is absolutely amazing, you paint a beautiful picture with your words. Sweet and cheerful, it has a good soft flow, just like the gentle rain. I like your cool blue background too, it fits the poem perfectly. Don't you just love how the field smells after a rain? All fresh and new and the colors seem brighter. Great poem!
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Thanks for entering.
Good luck.
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