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Willow

She exists
on a border between sanity and hell,
Beauty ethereal
untouched by lingering twisted demons
invading serenity

She sits
on razor blade edges of butterfly wings,
Pleasure and pain,
Tortured thoughts shattering crystal dreams
to glass

Solitary tear
slicing ice over pale porcelain flesh,
Marred fragility,
A single tear to stop the screams
soul drowning

He exists
in numb moments and meaningless chill,
So cold
Burying thoughts of her in day to day living
never succeeding

He believes
in living on razorblades and self pain inflictions,
His choice,
The easy way out is never really that simple,
Wrong decisions

They sit
apart in different tortured worlds of longing,
Iron wills,
Two taunted souls always yearning for unity,
Alone

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  • GypsyEyes
    January 26, 2008

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    your words are so powerful to me! i myself cut so to read your poem was just an amazing thing for me! i wish you the best of luck in the contest!
    NineTailedFox


  • CherryOnTop
    January 17, 2008

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    Man cutting to some is life because they feel by seeing their own blood they can feel through the numbness.Wonderful write your words flow smoothly.