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sew whut

throw away your sowing kit
quit embroidering your skin
everybody tells me so
but i don't let them in

go break of all your joints
try to bear the pain
without all the diamond skies
the real world is quite plain

sew whut
i don't care
about anything at all
some fire
some ash
roses start to fall

if gave up on my drinking
gave up on my skin
i would have to love someone
think about my kin

open hearts get broken
open doors get shut
behind them i don't have to hear
and then i'm not the nut

sew whut
i don't care
about anything at all
cept booze
and slooze
rose break and fall

remember me and enter in
a cookie will be set
keep watching out the window
and she isn't home quite yet

a daydream and a cheetah
a lion in the sun
i don't think she'll notice
why not have some fun

What the fuck is all this mess
society has me in this test
they tell me i'm no good at all
cause i don't let morals fall

What the fuck is this
who the fuck are you
why the fuck should i care
if you don't give a fuck about you
then why should i

Author notes

i'm getting really sick of people telling me, i need to learn how to relax and have a beer, i need to go to strip clubs, i need to get laid, i need to be "normal."
if sin is normal, i'd like to be change

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grr. i will never cause rose's petals to wilt

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  • draagyn
    January 13, 2008
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    YAY

    I love your "change".. ur right if sin is normal, fuck all the normal bastards! sorry... i just hate that people are like that to you. sorry I can't be there to tell them to bug off. (haha, i get this image of me guarding you with a can of OFF bug spray) wonderful poetry btw


    • Mr Majenta gold member
      January 14, 2008
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      i wonder did you get the kayla referenced pun?


      • draagyn
        January 14, 2008

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        yes, i think so... let me read again ... "keep watching out the window and she isn't home quite yet" etc


        • Mr Majenta gold member
          January 15, 2008
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          no, that implied that the veiwpoint was looking at porn and watching to make sure his girlfriend wasn't home yet.
          i'll give you a hint, it appears twice in the song, and once in the "what would you like readers to comment on" dealy.

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