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Guess Who's Coming To Dinner...





Do my eyes deceive me?
Is that delicious avocado on your plate?
You know how much I love it,
with a sprinkling of snow pea sprouts
Wow...yummy, fresh tomato wedges,
did you grow them yourself, my dear?
Fish Fingers too, now let me think,
I guess it must be Friday

As to where you're eating
well, to me that's pretty obvious...
I seem to remember a computer and keyboard
perched upon a desk beside the window
I'll bet Chilli dog is sitting at your feet
waiting for any morsel you might drop

I'm glad to see you're eating
even if it's just enough to feed a mouse
I'll jump in the car and head your way,

so get busy and set a place for me

it's not good to always eat alone


Isn't that what friends are for?

 

 

 

 

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  • plainoljoe
    January 13, 2008

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    sinve you're on the way, I'll get out my best chinette and light some sandlewood insence

    Joe


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    auntie thats making me hungry and i cant be bothered to go get food lol. this is such a unique and yet amazing write and i love the way yu wrote it. well done and best of luck


  • im only half empty
    January 13, 2008
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    mmm...you're making me hungry. Verry, intersting poem here


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    January 13, 2008

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    MMMMMM, Now I want me some avocado
    You described it all so well Mum....

    Just how I imagine you to be eating plate at the computer

    It's what I do half the time lol

    Lov'd it Mum


    Cin


    • Recluse Writer gold member
      January 13, 2008
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      Sooo pleased to see someone else like me
      Cannot miss a thing while I eat my tea
      Cheers


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    Your place is set
    We're ready to go
    Yes Avo & sprouts!
    How did you know?
    I guess the chef's
    come out in you
    You win the points
    for observance too!

    Cannot get past you can I??

    Thanks for joining me and I look forward to another personal one

    Loo-weez


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    Aww this is a beautiful write for Linda It is good to see her eating You know Now tyou mentioned it I can see the avocado but I couldn't before lol.
    All the best with this Margaret
    Gaylene


    • Recluse Writer gold member
      January 13, 2008
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      Lettuce is so bland and simple
      Me I'd rather squeeze a pimple
      Sorry I baffooled you so
      If you'd zoomed in you'd really know


      Ooops the mayo looks kinda like I did just that huh?


      MWAH


    • pearl-dragon
      January 13, 2008
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      Thank you Gaylene. When it comes to avocado or mango I think I would walk a hundred miles over broken glass for some...they are so delicious and have a wonderful, almost decadent taste that I just love Ohhh...now I'm hungry

      Margaret


  • SunsetDreams
    January 12, 2008
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    This made me smile!


    • pearl-dragon
      January 12, 2008
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      Thank you, that was my intention. I don't often write humour so it was a nice change for me

      I appreciate your comment and welcome to AP...I see you're a new arrival.

      Margaret

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