Freedom

Sweet entities

soar
on

textured

dreams.

Growing essence
abounds

spiritually
wild fragrances

Mortal orgasmic images

plant

kindred

promises

Of shadowed reality
into

freedom...

forever!

Author notes

Prompt: "My soul will be free"

Quick Contest For The Willing by helios. 300 points, ended January 13, 2008, 8 entries
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individuality
March 1, 2008

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let the wings soar as freedom's breath rushng around the sky, fragrant smiles will be alight. a good poem.
x-Black-Butterfly-x
January 13, 2008

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wo this is such a beautiful and powerful write and i love the way you wrote it. well done hun and best of luck
helios
January 13, 2008
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I just had to come back and tell you.
This was in fact beautiful.
Keep writing!
Naridill
January 13, 2008

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Little less in word limit but still, wow, very beautifully said. I love the texture this poem lifts up.
- CherylAnn
  January 13, 2008
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  something is messing up as I had 30 words yet they are not all there for some reason...Did word count through word so I would not have to count(lol)
- - Naridill
    January 13, 2008
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    Word count always tweaks with my mind.
helios
January 13, 2008
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Looks pretty. Next time try for the 30 words.
RedwingSpirit
January 13, 2008
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very well written this is great good luck with it.
Melodies
January 13, 2008

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OOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooh! I love what you did here. Really lovely lines of poetry.
crimsondew
January 13, 2008
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Wonderful
Really well done here...
All the best!