As I start to write
I fade to a world
of emotion and imagination
I unchain my soul and let it soar
to a place where colors speak
and the words paint the walls
in this place my spirit flies
I can never shed a tear
my mind fills with new creation
in a world where emotion and imagination rage
I unchain my soul and break free from this cage of reality
letting the words flow
going where they please
transforming something simple into nothing short of beauty
the colors swirl around speaking of their troubles
my hand starts to move saying what I can't
showing the world what I hold inside
in this world of thoughts and emotion
my soul roams free
chatting with the flowers
listening to the wind
finding inspiration in each and everything
when my writing is done
I slowly fade from this world
back into reality
Author notes
option 6 AP name is AngelGone2Hell
A contest entry
- Mood and Moon Inspiration by cherche -d -ame.
3500 points, ended February 9, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Quickie!!! by ShadowsMidnightRose.
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Comments
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This is excellent! I love how you have composed this piece. It has such lovely detail and perfect word usage and imagery!
My favorite lines were:
unchain my soul and let it soar
to a place where colors speak
and the words paint the walls
in this place my spirit flies
It explains so much....
Thank you very much for entering my contest and good luck! -
you sure got passed that block with this entry
What a beautiful imaginary world you created [and how great it is when we are able to do that now and then]. It makes the reality that we have to return to a little less harsh , for maybe from deep within we will always hear the whispers of the flowers and the chatting of the wind. Thank you for this entry and for sharing it with us readers. Best wishes,
reenie
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i love the lines...my soul roams free
chatting with the flowers
listening to the wind
finding inspiration in each and everything
very creative -
A great write for being a block-breaker! Nicely done! I thought that it might have been a freewrite (I suppose that they are pretty much the same, eh?) Ah well... As I said though- well penned. You have great imagrey in here, with a very smooth flow. There is a little bit of repetition, but thats ok since it seems to fit. The only thing that I would note is that on line... 7, I think... you wrote 'flys' instead of 'flies'.
Overall, though, it's quite an enjoyable read!
Burmina
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