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So long my friend...

So long my friend,
You will be missed

Your time was short
but presence felt.

Without you I am lost
Because of you forever changed.

Thankyou for your blessing
Thankyou for your love.

May you soar with the angels
And fly freely for eternity.

Goodbye my friend
goodbye...

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  • SunsetDreams
    January 12, 2008

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    Quite a bittersweet poem. The short stanzas gave it a blunt simplicity and directness but didn't take away from the emotion behind it. Nice work.