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[ You ]

You
You will never know
the pain that you left me in
the day that you said goodbye
without giving my love a try.

You
You will not remember my name
I will be nothing but a face in the crowd
another voice gone unheard
just a broken heart crying out loud.

I
I thought my love would be enough
something you could hold on to
when times would be tough.

I
I really looked up to you
gave you all of my love that was true
I only wanted to be there for you.

You
You broke more than my heart
it is more than miles that keeps us apart
now that I am completely shut out
I wonder what our love was all about.

You
You are always on my mind
all the things I see and do
I want to share with you
but you are gone
and I'm left here alone
and you will never know
the pain that you left me in
the day that you said goodbye
without giving my love a try.






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  • goddesskevauna
    February 23, 2008

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    Wow! That is fascinating writing! Nope, never know at all. Gone into oblivion, never to know. Especially when love is not given a chance.


  • plainoljoe
    January 13, 2008

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    too often does one come, take not share, then leave nothing but the cold in their heart and thoughts of what might have been

    Joe