What makes a man?
Is it the strength of his hand?
Is it the weight of his heart?
What is the most important part?
There should be humility,
a fight against cruelty.
Never should he scream or yell.
Never a lie should he tell.
He should always do what is right,
never should he fall, from the light.
Even when no one is there,
right actions he should bear.
He should never fall to greed,
never ignore one in need.
He should always stand straight and tall,
and treat women as equals most of all.
Author notes
Basically, what I think makes one of us a "good" guy.
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It is sad there is even a need for a write like this, they should all be good guys in a perfect world
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Good read!
I agree with you that this is what makes for a good guy. Well done. Just a proofreading comment, shouldn't line 3 read ...weight of his heart?
Your rhyme has a natural feel. Keep writing.
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Bella D
Yes, yes it should. Thanks for catching that, I've fixed it. Also, thank you for the wonderful comment. It's much appreicated!
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