Walk on water glide on air,
ghostly vision now appear.
Let me believe restore hope,
bring forth hope so I may cope.
Oversees God's creations,
wonders of imagination.
Wander amid earthly man,
helping where ever you can.
Spirit and real world connect,
specter here to guard, protect.
See ever so faintly there,
appaition come to care.
Seeking solace near the pond,
with this spirit from beyond.
Past the realm of God's domain,
help mortal man face his pain.
Souls, angels, spirits adrift,
for earthly man to uplift.
So many here to wander free,
throughout God's great tapestry.
In a list
A contest entry
- Kids vs. Adults by Quiet places.
600 points, ended January 18, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love your take on the prompt! The rhyming was really good... This poem sounds like a spell or chant.
Thank you for the comment on my poem!
Always,
Cassie
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hello my lovely auntie
It feels wonderful to read your amazing poems here again.
Wish you best luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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Hello my sweet niece. It is wonderful to have you comment again. I have missed yopu. I hope all is well with you. Take care, Aunt Sandy
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great metaphor and rhyme
I love the spectrum you have created from the spiritual world to the reality of how they connect.
good luck in the contest
Tamara
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Thank you Tamara, I so appreciate you stopping by. Take care, Sandy
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this is an amazing write and i love the expressions and rhyme that you have used well done and best of luck
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A beautiful comment dear grandaughter. Thank you for stopping by and always reading my poetry. Blessngs to you, Grammy
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Excellent write!!
Love where this poem goes! Fantastic expression in your words and flow of the poem also! A beautiful message! Don
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Thank you for the lovely comment. It is always a pleasure to hear from you. Hope you have been well. Take care, Sandy
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This is an absolutely stunning piece and perfect for the picture. i had to reread it twice it was so beautiful. keep that ink flowing,
hugs,
georgie,
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Thank you for this lovely comment. I appreciate you stopping by and reading. Take care, Sandy
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It is really amazing when the spirit and the world actually do connect. So many amazing things happen.
This was beautiful, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Kari
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Thank you for this wonderful comment. Yes it is amazing when both worlds connect. It reinforces my beliefs on an afterlife in heaven. You take care. Sandy
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I liked this
It is so true, and real who can one seem so blind till another points things out. Then after a while the vision goes so so clear....mac Loved your work
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Hello my friend. Thank you for another great comment. Thank you for always being so encouraging not only in my writing but my faith too. God Bless you my friend. You take care, Sandy
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Love This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What a beautiful piece you have penned here and the border is just an added bonus giving an example of God's beautiful tapestry!!!You paint a lovely imagery with your words and the reader can just float all the way through this poem. I love the picture too and it could e that of an angel or even Jesus walking on the water either way it all ties in just lovely together!! Thanks for sharing!!!~~Toni~~
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Good morning Toni, It is so nice to hear ftrom you. It is always a pleasure. Thank you for this lovely comment. It is so appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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