There you stand,
A man of pride.
In no one will you confide.
Your eyes are dark,
Your smile cold.
There you are cruel as bold.
The words you say are harsh and pained,
As you rule you seem to gain.
But from your hatred I feel the rain.
Deep beyond the depths of false,
There stands a man with a shattered heart.
Never from his brother to part.
Though you appear villainous and deaf,
Truly you are a gentle man.
A man who misses his biggest fan.
A brother of honor you wear a mask,
Which seems glued to your face.
There you are choking with pain’s awful lace.
Let go of your mask,
Please put it down.
For you can not fix your brothers drown.
He loves you so,
As you family too.
Please remember those words.. I Love You
Author notes
"Just cause you play a tough guy doesn't mean you are!"
-Mark Wahlberg; The Departed
about my bf dad
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired Again by chasing rainbows.
600 points, ended January 27, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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the rhyme seemed a bit forced and the structure threw me off a little at first, but the emotion is just bleeding off of it and I respect that.
Thanks
xx Sin
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A heart of stone may never cry while a heart of love will always fly.
most will live with a mixture of both..
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