Rich girl couldn't help but cry
'Her life is perfect.'
'She has everything.'
That's what they always said
No one really knew
Rich girl had anything money could buy
'But you can't buy love.'
'The best things in life are free.'
How she voiced that these words were wrong
Showing hypocricy
In her mind she believed these words
And knew they were true
Poor girl couldn't help but scream
'Look at her clothes!'
'Look at her house!'
That's what they always half whispered
Knowing that she heard
Poor girl had no cash
She barely had what she needed
She was truely beautiful, inside and out
But that's not what people saw
They just saw her enpty pockets and deemed her worthless
About equal to an animal
Happy girl couldn't help but cut
'She's so perfect.'
'I wish I was her.'
It's what they thought and what they said
If only they knew
Happy girl was crying under the smiling mask
Wondering the worth of her life
Self conscience and self doubting
Her emotions were consuming her smile
She didn't know what to do
She just wanted out
Any way out
Emo girl couldn't help but feel
'Ew, she's such a freak.'
'She's just a poser.'
They wouldn't stop talking about her
They didn't know that she cared
Emo girl bled every time she heard them talking
Hating that her life had put her where it did
Trying to prove she was strong
In the only way she knew how
Dressing how she wanted and saying how she felt
Trying to make someone understand
Who she was, and why she was that way
Rich girl had no parents in her eyes
Selfish, uncaring rich parents or none at all - what's the difference?
Poor girl had no friends
No one cared about all she had to offer when she couldn't buy their friendship
Happy girl didn't know what to do with her life
She smiled and laughed and played the scene, wishing someone could see behind the act
Emo girl was just trying to prove she didn't care that no one cared
She wanted to show who she was, though no one would understand
Four depressed girls
Wishing it wasn't this way
And rich girl wanted to be poor
WIth a loving, happy family
And poor girl wanted to be rich
With lots of friends and no mockery
Happy girl was tired of apathy
When inside she was really dying
Emo girl was tired of feeling
When inside her heart was only hate, but no strength
And some things didn't change
Rich girl was rich with no family
Poor girl was poor with only family
Happy girl was hiding true feelings and hurting
And emo girl was showing her feelings and hurting
But - sometimes, just somtimes
They could see the bright side...that shimmer of hope
Rich girl smiled
Poor girl beamed
Happy girl grinned
And emo girl laughed
Everyone has thier own problems
But everyone's lucky, too
Rich girl can buy almost anything, living in luxury
Poor girl is beautiful and loved by her family
Happy girl is the center of the world, beloved
Emo girl knows exactly who she is
And sometimes that was enough to see what could come
Because soon there would be four women
Doctor
Model
Photographer
And famous writer
Just four women
Who had become best friends
And when they looked over their childhoods together they smiled
Rich girl had family now - her friends
Money isn't everything
Poor girl was earning what she wanted - no longer judged
She had everything she wanted
Happy girl was now happy - making other people feel important
It made her feel right; herself
Emo girl was accepted and admired - writing her heart out and being applauded for it
No longer outside the crowd
Because there no longer was rich girl
Or poor girl
Or happy girl
Or emo girl
There was just four women
Four satisfied women
Author notes
Sorry if this doesn't quite your contest....no hard feelings. But I thought it did. I hope you liked it. Thanks for reading!
A contest entry
- Smile? by Friday.
525 points, ended January 18, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Not a poet! ...Quite :D What do you think?
Comments
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While this is a little story like for me you really had the feel there. And I love what this says about life and other people in general. I think this is something that many people should read before they form opinions about others. Thank you
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Very well written.
The weaving in and out of the four subject made it a very interesting read. It was very clever pointing out that each girl wanted something the other had. I've often found myself wanting what belonged to others so, I can make a good relation to your piece. Also, I'm glad to see a piece such as this end positively, people overcoming thier problems. I say, "Bravo"

