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This is new york ( your welcome to it)

Got to rush keep on the move,
someone around here's got something to prove,

Don't give me no bullshit
no false psychobabble,
I'm not paranoid,
this is the big apple.

Though why they should say that?
arn't apples mainly sweet,
not so half the people you meet.

All want to be someone or just want to "be",
I'm not into analysis,
I just want to be me!

Ive seen into the dark side,
the scandal the vice,
they should have called it the asylum,
instead of naming it twice.

Still I'm thankful there's an upside to downtown Manhattan,
can't live every day like a wizened old madman.

When I finally retire!
I'll retire to the top,
forever forgetting
I was a bent cop.

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Welcome to New York....

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  • Not bad, to coin a Mairi bheag / Cricketjeff phrase which, translated, means pretty dumb good!

  • cirque du soleil
    July 21, 2008
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    WOW!!!1
    amazing!!!!!!!!

    Thank you for the entry!!!


  • Beverlynohime
    January 12, 2008
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    Wow I really like this! Great job! Good Luck in the contest!


  • JustFallingApart
    January 12, 2008
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    finaly, someone writes about my home! nice work!


  • chasing rainbows
    January 12, 2008

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    this is great. Some of the rhyme was a little forced but I like how it's just bam, straight to the point

    Thanks
    xx Sin

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